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Avoid the Top Resume Mistakes by Peter
Vogt MonsterTRAK Career Coach
It's deceptively easy to make mistakes on your resume and exceptionally
difficult to repair the damage once an employer has your resume. So prevention
is critical, especially if you've never written a resume before. Here are the
most common pitfalls and how you can avoid them.
Typos and Grammatical Errors
Your resume needs to be perfect from a grammatical standpoint. If it isn't,
employers will read between the lines and draw not-so-flattering conclusions
about you. Among them: "This person can't write," or "This person obviously
doesn't care."
Lack of Specifics
Employers need to understand what you've done and accomplished. Take the
following for example:
- Worked with employees in a restaurant setting.
- Recruited, hired, trained and supervised more than 20 employees in a
restaurant with $2 million in annual sales.
Both of these phrases could describe the same person, but clearly the second
one's details and specifics will more likely grab an employer's attention.
Attempting One Size Fits All
Whenever you try to develop a one-size-fits-all resume to send
to all employers, you almost always end up with a resume employers will toss in
the recycle bin. Employers want you to write a resume specifically for them.
They expect you to clearly show how and why you fit the position in a specific
organization.
Highlighting Duties Instead of Accomplishments
It's easy to slip into a mode where you simply start listing job duties on
your resume. For example:
- Attended group meetings and recorded minutes.
- Worked with children in a daycare setting.
- Updated departmental files.
Employers, however, don't care so much about what you've done as what you've
accomplished in your various activities. They're looking for statements more
like these:
- Used laptop computer to record weekly meeting minutes and compiled them in a
Microsoft Word-based file for future organizational reference.
- Developed three daily activities for preschool-age children and prepared
them for a 10-minute holiday program performance.
- Reorganized 10 years' worth of unwieldy files, making them easily accessible
to department members.
Going on Too Long or Cutting Things Too Short
Despite what you may read or hear, there are no real rules governing the
length of your resume. Why? Because human beings will be reading your resume,
and different human beings have different preferences and expectations where
resumes are concerned.
That doesn't mean you should start sending out five-page resumes, of course.
Generally speaking, you usually need to limit yourself to a maximum of two
pages. But don't feel you have to use two pages if one will do. Conversely,
don't cut the meat out of your resume simply to make it conform to an arbitrary
one-page standard.
A Bad Objective
Employers do read your resume's objective statement, but too often they plow
through vague pufferies like, "Seeking a challenging position that offers
professional growth." Give employers something specific and, more importantly,
something that focuses on their needs as well as your own. Example: "A
challenging entry-level marketing position that allows me to contribute my
skills and experience in fundraising for nonprofits."
No Action Verbs
Avoid using phrases like "responsible for." Instead, use action verbs:
"Resolved user questions as part of an IT help desk serving 4,000 students and
staff."
Leaving Off Important Information
You may be tempted, for example, to eliminate mention of the jobs you've
taken to earn extra money for school. Typically, however, the soft skills you've
gained from these experiences (e.g., work ethic, time management) are more
important to employers than you might think.
Visually Too Busy
If your resume is wall-to-wall text featuring five different fonts, it will
most likely give the employer a headache. So show your resume to several other
people before sending it out. Do they find it visually attractive? If what you
have is hard on the eyes, revise.
Incorrect Contact Information
I once worked with a student whose resume seemed incredibly strong, but he
wasn't getting any bites from employers. So one day, I jokingly asked him if the
phone number he'd listed on his resume was correct. It wasn't. Once he changed
it, he started getting the calls he'd been expecting. Moral of the story:
Double-check even the most minute, taken-for-granted details -- sooner rather
than later.
TOP TEN RESUME MISTAKES THE PERFECT RESUME, BY Tom Jackson
We have surveyed scores of prime employers, career counselors and event
agencies to determine what they feel are the most explain repeated mistakes in
the thousands of resumes they see.
These are the top ten mistakes
1. too long (preferred length is one page)
2 Disorganized - information is scattered around the page hard to follow
3. Poorly typed and printed - hard to read - looks unprofessional
4 Overwritten - long paragraphs and sentences - takes too long to say too
little
5. Too sparse - gives only bare essentials of dates and job titles
6 Not enough entered for results - doesn't show what the candidate
accomplished or, the job
7. Too many irrelevancies - height, weight, sex, health, marital status are
not needed on today's resume
8 misspellings ie, typographical errors, poor grammar resumes should be
carefully proofread before they are printed and mailed
9. Tries too hard - fancy typesetting and binders, photographs and exotic
paper stocks distract from the clarity of the presentation
10. Misdirected - too many resumes arrive on employers' desks unanswered and
with little or no apparent connections to the organization - cover letters would
help avoid this
Some More Resume-Writing Rules
Keep sentences and paragraphs short (no paragraph of more than ten
lines).
Use indented and “bulleted” statements (with * or · before each) where
appropriate, rather than complete sentences.
Use simple terms rather than complex expressions that say the same thing.
Use quantities, amounts, and dollar values where they enhance the
description of what you did (“increased sales by $100,000 per year”).
Put strongest statements at the top, working downhill from that.
Have someone with good skills in English check for spelling, punctuation,
and grammar.
Avoid excessive use of “I”.
Do not include hobbies, vocational or social interests unless they clearly
contribute to your work abilities.
Avoid purely personal evaluations.
“I am an intelligent and diligent researcher” -- avoid
“I have finished three major research projects” -- could be included
Don’t go overboard with esoteric jargon. Remember that unenlightened
people may have to understand you too.
Some Resume Don’ts
Don’t include pictures.
Don’t list references or relatives.
Don’t put resume in fancy binders or folders.
Don’t forget phone number(s), area code, zip code.
Don’t list sex, weight, health or other personal irrelevancies.
Don’t highlight problems (divorce, hospitalization, handicaps).
Don’t include addresses of prior employers (city and state are okay).
Don’t include salary information in your resume.
Final Reminders
Remember that the reason employers get interested in you are the
values you can produce for them. This value is demonstrated by what you
have done as much as by what you can do. Eliminate things that don’t focus
on your potential value. Above all, remember that your resume is a
demonstration of your ability to handle written communication. Put as much
care and attention into it as you would a one-page advertisement for a fine
product.
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