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The resume is a tool
with one specific purpose: to win an interview. If it doesn't, it isn't an
effective resume. A resume is an advertisement, nothing more, nothing less. A
great resume doesn't just tell them what you have done but makes the same
assertion that all good ads do: If you buy this product, you will get these
specific, direct benefits. It presents you in the best light. It convinces the
employer that you have what it takes to be successful in this new position or
career. It is so pleasing to the eye that the reader is enticed to pick up and
read it. It "whets the appetite," stimulates interest in meeting you
and learning more about you. It inspires the prospective employer to pick up
the phone and ask you to come in for an interview.
Other reasons to have a resume
- To pass the employer's
screening process (requisite educational level, number years' experience,
etc.), to give basic facts which might favorably influence the employer
(companies worked for, political affiliations, racial minority, etc.). To
provide contact information: an up-to-date address and a telephone number
(a telephone number which will always be answered
during business hours).
- To establish you as a
professional person with high standards and excellent writing skills,
based on the fact that the resume is so well done (clear, well-organized,
well-written, well-designed, of the highest professional grades of
printing and paper). For persons in the art, advertising, marketing, or
writing professions, the resume can serve as a sample of their skills.
- To give to potential
employers, to give to your job-hunting contacts and professional
references, to provide background information, to give out in
"informational interviews" with the request for a critique (a
concrete creative way to cultivate the support of this new person), to
send a contact as an excuse for follow-up contact, and to keep in your
briefcase to give to people you meet casually - as another form of
"business card".
- As a covering piece or
addendum to another form of job application, as part of a grant or
contract proposal, as an accompaniment to graduate school or other
application.
- As a formality for an employer's
personnel files.
- As a means of helping you in
the process of clarifying direction, qualifications, and strengths, as a
means of boosting confidence, as a positive way of starting the commitment
to a job or career change.
What a resume is not
It is a mistake to think
of your resume as a history of your past, as a personal statement or as some
sort of self expression. Sure, most of the content of any resume is focused on
your job history. But, write from the intention to create interest, to persuade
the employer to call you. If you write with that goal, your final product will
be very different than if you write to inform or catalog your job history.
Most people write a
resume because everyone knows that you have to have one to get a job. They
write their resume grudgingly, to fulfill this obligation. Writing the resume
is only slightly above filling out income tax forms in the hierarchy of worldly
delights. If you realize that a great resume can be your ticket to getting
exactly the job you want, you may be able to muster some genuine enthusiasm for
creating a real masterpiece, rather than the feeble products most people turn
out.
How do I pick my target job?
If you are hunting for a
job but are not sure you are on a career path that is perfect for you, you are making a big and unnecessary compromise. You
are probably going to wind up in something that doesn't really fit you very
well, that you are not really going to enjoy, and that you will, most likely
leave within three years. Doesn't sound like much of a life to me. How about you? Are you willing to keep putting up with
pinning your fate on the random turnings of the wheel?
Impressing your prospective employer
Research has shown that
only one interview is granted for every 200 resumes received by the average
employer. Research also tells us that your resume will be quickly scanned,
rather than read. 10 to 20 seconds is all the time you have to persuade a
prospective employer to read further. What this means is that the decision to
interview a candidate is usually based on an overall first impression of the
resume, a quick screening which so impresses the reader and convinces them of
the candidate's qualifications that an interview results. As a result, the top
half of the first page of your resume will either make you or break you. By the
time they have read the first few lines, you have either caught their interest,
or your resume has failed. That is why we say that your resume is an ad. You
hope it will have the same result as a well-written ad: to get the reader to
respond.
To write an effective
resume, you have to learn how to write powerful, but subtle advertising copy.
Not only that, but you must sell a product in which you have large personal
investment: you. What's worse, given the fact that most of us do not think in a
marketing-oriented way naturally, you are probably not looking forward to
selling anything, let alone yourself. But, if you want to increase your job
hunting effectiveness as much as possible, you would be wise to learn to write
a spectacular resume. You do not need to hard sell or make any claims that are
not absolutely true. You do need to get over your modesty and unwillingness to
toot your own horn. People more often buy the best advertised product than they
buy the best product. That is good news if you are willing to learn to create
an excellent resume. With a little extra effort, you will find that you will
usually get a better response from prospective employers than people with
better credentials.
Think about what the employer needs, not
what you need.
Imagine that you are the
person who will be doing the hiring. This person is not some anonymous paper
pusher deep in the bowels of the personnel department. Usually, the person who
makes the hiring decision is also the person who is responsible for the bottom
line productivity of the project or group you hope to be a part of. This is a
person who cares deeply how well the job will be done. You need to write your
resume to appeal directly to them. Ask yourself: What would make someone the
perfect candidate? What special abilities would this person have? What would
set a truly exceptional candidate apart from a merely good one? What does the
employer really want? If you are seeking a job in a field you know well, you
probably already know what would make someone a superior candidate. If you are
not sure, you can gather hints from the help wanted ad you are answering, from
asking other people who work in the same company or the same field. You could
even call the prospective employer and ask them what they want. Don't make wild
guesses unless you have to. It is very important to do this step well. If you
are not addressing their real needs, they will not respond to your resume. If
you feel slightly lost at sea in doing this sort of research, watch some old
Rockford Files reruns to learn from the master how to do this kind of creative
research. Putting yourself in the moccasins of the person doing the hiring is
the first, and most important step in writing a resume
that markets you rather than describes your history or herstory.
Every step in producing a finished document should be part of your overall
intention to convey to the prospective employer that you are a truly
exceptional candidate.
Plan, Plan and Plan some more.
Focus your writing
efforts. Get clear what the employer is looking for and what you have to offer
before you begin your resume. Write your answers to the above mentioned
question, "What would make someone the perfect candidate?" on
notebook paper, one answer per page. Prioritize the sheets of paper, based on
which qualities or abilities you think would be most important to the person
doing the hiring. Then, starting with the top priority page, fill the rest of
that page, or as much of it as you can, with brainstorming about why you are
the person who best fulfills the employer's needs. Write down everything you
have ever done that demonstrates that you fit perfectly with what is wanted and
needed by the prospective employer.
The whole idea is to
loosen up your thinking enough so that you will be able to see some new
connections between what you have done and what the employer is looking for.
You need not confine yourself to work-related accomplishments. Use your entire
life as the palette to paint with. If Sunday school or your former gang are the only places you have had a chance to demonstrate
your special gift for teaching and leadership, fine. The point is to cover all
possible ways of thinking about and communicating what do you do well. What are
the talents you bring to the market place? What do you have to offer the
prospective employer? If you are making a career change or are a young person
and new to the job market, you are going to have to be especially creative in
getting across what makes you stand out. These brainstorming pages will be the
raw material from which you craft your resume. One important part of the
planning process is to decide which resume format fits your needs best. Don't
automatically assume that a traditional format will work best for you. More about that later.
A great resume has two sections
In the first, you make
assertions about your abilities, qualities and achievements. You write powerful,
but honest, advertising copy that makes the reader immediately perk up and
realize that you are someone special. The second section, the evidence section,
is where you back up your assertions with evidence that you actually did what
you said you did. This is where you list and describe the jobs you have held,
your education, etc. This is all the stuff you are obliged to include. Most
resumes are just the evidence section, with no assertions. If you have trouble
getting to sleep, just read a few resumes each night just before going to bed.
Your troubles will disappear! Nothing puts people to sleep better than the
average resume. The juice is in the assertions section. When a prospective
employer finishes reading your resume, you want them to immediately reach for
the phone to invite you in to interview. The resumes you have written in the
past have probably been a gallant effort to inform the reader. You don't want
them informed. You want them interested and excited. In fact, it is best to
only hint at some things. Leave the reader wanting more. Leave them with a bit
of mystery. That way, they have even more reason to reach for the phone. The
assertions section usually has two or three sections. In all of them, your job
is to communicate, assert and declare that you are the best possible candidate
for the job and that you are hotter than a picnic on Mercury.
You start by naming your
intended job. This may be in a separate "Objective" section, or may
be folded into the second section, the "Summary." If you are making a
change to a new field, or are a young person not fully established in a career,
start with a separate "Objective" section.
Objective
Ideally, your resume
should be pointed toward conveying why you are the perfect candidate for one
specific job or job title. Good advertising is directed towards a very specific
target audience. When a car company is trying to sell their inexpensive compact
to an older audience, they show grandpa and grandma stuffing the car with
happy, shiny grandchildren and talk about how safe and economical the car is.
When they advertise the exact same car to the youth market, they show it going
around corners on two wheels, with plenty of drums and power chords thundering
in the background. You want to focus your resume just as specifically.
Targeting your resume
requires that you be absolutely clear about your career direction or, at least
that you appear to be clear. The way to demonstrate your clarity of direction
or apparent clarity is to have the first major topic of your resume be your
OBJECTIVE. Let's look at a real world example. Suppose the owner of a small
software company puts an ad in the paper seeking an experienced software sales
person. A week later they have received 500 resumes. The applicants have a
bewildering variety of backgrounds. The employer has no way of knowing whether
any of them are really interested in selling software. They remember all the
jobs they applied for that they didn't really want. They know that many of the
resumes they received are from people who are just using a shotgun approach,
casting their seed to the winds. Then, they come across a resume in the pile
that starts with the following:
"OBJECTIVE - a software sales position in an
organization where an extraordinary record of generating new accounts,
exceeding sales targets and enthusiastic customer relations would be needed.
This wakes them up. They
are immediately interested. This first sentence conveys some very important and
powerful messages: "I want exactly the job you are offering. I am a
superior candidate because I have the qualities that are most important to you.
I want to make a contribution to your company." This works well because
the employer is smart enough to know that someone who wants to do exactly what
you are offering will be much more likely to succeed than someone who doesn't.
And, will probably be a lot more pleasant to work with as well. Secondly, this
candidate has done a good job of establishing why they are the perfect
candidate in their first sentence. They have thought about what qualities would
make a candidate stand out. They have started communicating that they are that
person immediately. What's more, they are communicating from the point of view
of making a contribution to the employer. They are not writing from a
self-centered point of view. Even when people are savvy enough to have an
objective, they often make the mistake of saying something like, "a
position where I can hone my skill as a scissors sharpener.."
or something similar. The employer is interested in hiring you for what you can
do for them, not for fulfilling your private goals and agenda.
Here's how to write your
objective. First of all, decide on a specific job title for your objective. Go
back to your list of answers to the question "How can I demonstrate that I
am the perfect candidate?" What are the two or three qualities, abilities
or achievements that would make a candidate stand out as truly exceptional for
that specific job? The person in the above example recognized that the
prospective employer, being a small, growing software company, would be very
interested in candidates with an ability to generate new accounts. So, they
made that the very first point they got across in their resume. Be sure the
objective is to the point. Do not use fluffy phrases which are obvious or do
not mean anything, such as: "allowing the ability to enhance potential and
utilize experience in new challenges." An objective may be broad and still
somewhat undefined in some cases, such as: "a mid-level management
position in the hospitality or entertainment industry." Remember, your resume
will only get a few seconds attention, at best! You have to generate interest
right away, in the first sentence they lay their eyes on. Having
an objective statement that really sizzles, is highly effective. And
it's simple to do. One format is:
OBJECTIVE: An xxx position in an organization where yyy
and zzz would be needed.
Xxx is the name of the position you seek. Yyy and zzz are the most
compelling qualities, abilities or achievements that will really make you stand
out above the crowd of applicants. The research you have previously done, to
find out what is most important to the employer will provide the information to
fill in yyy and zzz.
If you are not really
sure what job you are after, you should adapt your resume to each type of job
you apply for. There is nothing wrong with having several different resumes,
each with a different objective, each specifically crafted for a different type
of position. You may even want to change some parts of your resume for each job
you apply for. Have an objective that is perfectly matched with the job you are
applying for. Remember, you are writing advertising copy, not your life story.
You do not need to use a
separate "Objective" section if you are looking for a job in your
present field. You will include your "Objective" in your
"Summary" section. The point of using an "Objective" is to
create a specific psychological response in the mind of the reader. If you are
making a career change or are a young person, you want the employer to
immediately focus on where you are going, rather than where you have been. If
you are looking for another job in your present field, it is more important to
stress your qualities, achievements and abilities first.
A few examples of separate
"objective" sections:
- Senior staff position
with a bank that offers the opportunity to utilize my expertise in
commercial real estate lending and strategic management.
- An entry-level
position in the hospitality industry where a background in advertising
and public relations would be needed.
- A position teaching
English as a second language where a special ability to motivate and
communicate effectively with students would be needed.
Summary
The "summary"
or "summary of qualifications" consists of several concise statements
that focus the reader's attention on the most important qualities, achievements
and abilities you have to offer. Those qualities should be the most compelling
demonstrations of why they should hire you instead of the other candidates. It
gives you a brief opportunity to telegraph a few of your most sterling
qualities. It is your one and only chance to attract and hold their attention,
to get across what is most important, and to entice the employer to keep
reading. This is the spiciest part of the resume. This may be the only section
fully read by the employer, so it should be very strong and convincing. The
summary is the one place to include professional characteristics (extremely
energetic, a gift for solving complex problems in a fast-paced environment, a
natural salesman, exceptional interpersonal skills, committed to excellence,
etc.) which may be helpful in winning the interview. Gear every word in the
summary to your targeted goal.
How to write a
"Summary"? Go back to your lists that answer the question, What would make someone the ideal candidate? Look for the
qualities the employer will care about most. Then look at what you wrote about
why you are the perfect person to fill their need. Pick the stuff that best
demonstrates why they should hire you. Assemble it into your summary section.
The most common ingredients of a well-written summary are as follows. Of
course, you would not use all these ingredients in one "Summary." Use
the ones that highlight you best.
- A short phrase
describing your profession
- Followed by a
statement of broad or specialized expertise
- Followed by two or
three additional statements related to any of the following:
- breadth or depth of
skills
- unique mix of skills
- range of environments
in which you have experience
- a special or
well-documented accomplishment
- a history of awards,
promotions, or superior performance commendations
- One or more
professional or appropriate personal characteristics
- A sentence describing
professional objective or interest.
Notice that the examples
below show how to include your objective in the "summary" section. If
you are making a career change, your summary section should show how what you
have done in the past prepares you to do what you seek to do in the future. If
you are a young person new to the job market, your "summary" will be
based more on ability than experience.
A few examples
of "summary" sections:
- Highly motivated,
creative and versatile real estate executive with seven years of
experience in property acquisition, development and construction, as well
as the management of large apartment complexes. Especially skilled at
building effective, productive working relationships with clients and
staff. Excellent management, negotiation and public relations skills.
Seeking a challenging management position in the real estate field that
offers extensive contact with the public.
- Over 10 years as an
organizational catalyst/training design consultant with a track record of
producing extraordinary results for more than 20 national and community
based organizations. A commitment to human development and community
service. Energetic self-starter with excellent analytical,
organizational, and creative skills.
- Financial Management
Executive with nearly ten years of experience in banking and
international trade, finance, investments and economic policy. Innovative
in structuring credit enhancement for corporate and municipal financing.
Skilled negotiator with strong management, sales and marketing
background. Areas of expertise include (a bulleted list would follow this
paragraph.)
- Health Care
Professional experienced in management, program development and policy
making in the United States
as well as in several developing countries. Expertise in emergency
medical services. A talent for analyzing problems, developing and
simplifying procedures, and finding innovative solutions. Proven ability
to motivate and work effectively with persons from other cultures and all
walks of life. Skilled in working within a foreign environment with
limited resources.
- Commander - Chief
Executive Officer of the US
Navy, Atlantic Fleet. Expertise in all areas of management, with a proven
record of unprecedented accomplishment. History of the highest naval
awards and rapid promotion. Proven senior-level experience in executive
decision-making, policy direction, strategic business planning,
Congressional relations, financial and personnel management, research and
development, and aerospace engineering. Extensive knowledge of government
military requirements in systems and equipment. Committed to the highest
levels of professional and personal excellence.
- Performing artist
with a rich baritone voice and unusual range, specializing in classical,
spiritual, gospel and rap music. Featured soloist for two nationally
televised events. Accomplished pianist. Extensive performance experience
includes television, concert tours and club acts. Available for
commercial recording and live performances.
Skills and accomplishments
In this final part of
the assertions section of your resume, you go into more detail. You are still
writing to enroll the reader, not to inform them. Basically, you do exactly
what you did in the previous section, except that you go into more detail. In
the summary, you focused on your most special highlights. Now you tell the rest
of best of your story. Let them know what results you produced, what happened
as a result of your efforts, what you are especially gifted or experienced at
doing. Flesh out the most important highlights in your summary.
You are still writing to
do what every good advertisement does, communicating the following: if you buy
this product, you will get these direct benefits. If it doesn't contribute to
furthering this communication, don't bother to say it. Remember, not too much
detail. Preserve a bit of mystery. Don't tell them everything.
Sometimes the
"Skills and Accomplishments" sections is a
separate section. In a chronological resume, it becomes the first few phrases
of the descriptions of the various jobs you have held. We will cover that in a
few minutes, when we discuss the different types of resumes. When it is a
separate section, it can have several possible titles, depending on your situation:
- SKILLS AND
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- SUMMARY OF
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- SELECTED
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- RECENT
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- AREAS OF
ACCOMPLISHMENT AND EXPERIENCE
- AREAS OF EXPERTISE
- CAREER HIGHLIGHTS
- PROFESSIONAL
HIGHLIGHTS
- ADDITIONAL SKILLS AND
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
There are a number of
different ways to structure "Skills and Accomplishments" sections. In
all of these styles, put your skills and accomplishments in order of importance
for the desired career goal. If you have many skills, the last skill paragraph
might be called "Additional Skills".
Here are
a few ways you could structure your skills and accomplishments section:
1. A listing of skills or accomplishments or a combination of both, with
bullets
Example:
SELECTED SKILLS AND
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
- Raised $1900 in 21
days in canvassing and advocacy on environmental, health and consumer
issues.
- Conducted legal
research for four Assistant US Attorneys, for the US Attorney's office
- Coordinated Board of
Directors and Community Advisory Board of community mental health center.
Later commended as "the best thing that ever happened to that
job."
2. A listing of major skill headings with accomplishments under each. The
accomplishments can be a bulleted list or in paragraph form. The material under
the headings should include mention of accomplishments which prove each skill.
Example:
SELECTED
ACCOMPLISHMENTS
National Training Project / Conference Management.
Director of "Outreach on
Hunger", a national public education/training project funded by USAID, foundations
and all the major church denominations - Designed, managed and promoted 3-day
training conferences in cities throughout the US - Planned and managed 32
nationwide training seminars and a 5-day annual conference for university
vice-presidents and business executives.
Program Design: Universities.
Invited by Duke University
President Terry Sanford to develop new directions and programs for the
University's Office of Summer Educational Programs, first Director of Duke's
"Pre-college Program", first editor of "Summer
at Duke". Designed and successfully proposed a center for the study of
creativity at The George Washington University.
3. A list of bulleted accomplishments or skill paragraphs under each job (in
a chronological resume).
Example:
Director of Sales and Marketing
DELAWARE TRADE INTERNATIONAL, INC. Wilmington,
DE
- Promoted from Sales
Representative within one year of joining company to Director of Sales
and Marketing. Responsible for international sales of raw materials, as
well as printing and graphic arts equipment. Oversaw five sales managers.
Was in charge of direct sales and marketing in 17 countries throughout Europe
and the Middle East.
- Recruited, trained
and managed sales staff. Developed marketing strategy, prepared sales
projections and established quotas. Selected and contracted with overseas
sub-agents to achieve international market penetration.
- Negotiated and
finalized long-term contractual agreements with suppliers on behalf of
clients. Oversaw all aspects of transactions, including letters of
credit, international financing, preparation of import/export
documentation, and shipping/freight forwarding.
- Planned and
administered sales and marketing budget, and maintained sole profit/loss
responsibility. Within first year, doubled company's revenues, and
produced $7-9 million in annual sales during the next eight years.
Evidence and/or proof
There isn't really a
section on a resume called evidence. By evidence, we mean all the mandatory
information you must include on your resume: chronological work history with
dates, education, affiliations, list of software mastered, etc. All this stuff
is best placed in the second half of the resume. Put the hot stuff in the
beginning, and all this less exciting information afterward. It gives the
employer the details about where you worked, how long, your education, etc.
This is the standard stuff that any resume book can help you with, so we will
not cover it here in detail. We divided the resume into a "hot"
assertions section, and a more staid "evidence" section for the sake
of communicating that a great resume is not information but advertising. A
great resume has no evidence section. It is all one big assertions section. In
other words, every single word is crafted to have the desired effect, to get
them to pick up the phone and call you. It is all one big ad disguised as a history
of your working life. The decisions you make on what information to emphasize
and what to de-emphasize should be based on considering every word of your
resume to be an important part of the assertions section. The evidence includes
some or all of the following sections:
Experience
List
jobs in reverse chronological order. Don't go into detail on the jobs
early in your career; focus on the most recent and/or relevant jobs. (Summarize
a number of the earliest jobs in one line or very short paragraph, or list only
the bare facts with no position description.) Decide which is, overall, more
impressive: your job titles or the names of the firms you worked for; then
consistently begin with the more impressive of the two, perhaps using boldface
type.
You may want to describe
the firm in a phrase in parentheses if this will impress the reader. Put dates
in italics at the end of the job, to de-emphasize them; don't include months,
unless the job was held less than a year. Include military service,
internships, and major volunteer roles if desired; because the section is
labeled "Experience. " It does not mean that
you were paid.
Other headings:
"Professional History", "Professional Experience", not
"Employment" or "Work History", both which sound more
lower-level.
Education
List education in
reverse chronological order, degrees or licenses first, followed by
certificates and advanced training. Set degrees apart so they are easily seen.
Put in boldface whatever will be most impressive. Don't include any details
about college except major and awards, unless you are still in college or just
recently graduated. Include grade point average only if over 3.4. List selected
course work if this will help convince the reader of your qualifications for
the targeted job.
Do include advanced
training, but be selective with the information, summarizing the information
and including only what will be impressive for the reader.
No degree received yet?
If you are working on an uncompleted degree, include the degree and in
afterwards, parentheses the expected date of completion (expected 200x).
If you didn't finish
college, start with a phrase describing the field studied, then the school,
then the dates (the fact that there was no degree may be missed).
Other headings might be
"Education and Training", "Education and Licenses",
"Legal Education / Undergraduate Education" (for attorneys).
Awards
If the only awards
received were in school, put these under the Education section. Mention what
the award was for if you can (or just "for outstanding
accomplishment" or "outstanding performance"). This section is
almost a must, if you have received awards. If you have received commendations
or praise from some very senior source, you could call this section,
"Awards and Commendations." In that case, go ahead and quote the
source.
Professional Affiliations
Include only those that
are current and will be relevant and impressive. Include leadership roles if
appropriate. This is a good section to include to get
across your status as a member of a minority targeted for special consideration
by employers, if there is an association membership to show it and this would
be helpful in hiring and otherwise unclear on the resume.
This section can be
combined with "Civic / Community Leadership" as "Professional
and Community Memberships".
Civic / Community leadership
This is good to include
if the leadership roles or accomplishments are related to the job target and
can show skills acquired, for example: a loan officer hoping to become a
financial investment counselor who was Financial Manager of a community
organization charged with investing its funds. Any Board of Directors
membership or "chairmanship" would be good to include. Be careful
with political affiliations, as they could be a plus or minus with an employer
or company.
Publications
Include only if
published. Summarize if there are many.
Supervisor Comments
Include only if very
exceptional. Heavily edit for key phrases.
Personal Interests
Advantages: Can indicate
a skill or area or knowledge which is related to the goal, such as Photography
for someone in public relations, Carpentry and Wood-working, for someone in
Construction Management, or Sub-Saharan Pre-Paleolithic African Art, for
someone in Nuclear Weapon Research or Bartending. Can show
well-roundedness, good physical health, or knowledge of a subject related to
the goal. Can create common ground or spark conversation in an
interview.
Disadvantages: Are
usually irrelevant to the job goal and resume purpose, and may be meaningless
or an interview turn off ("TV and Reading",
"Fund raising for the Hell's Angels").
You probably should not
include a personal interests section. Your reason for including it is most
likely that you want to tell them about you. But, as you know, this is an ad.
If this section would powerfully move the employer to understand why you would
be the best candidate, include it, otherwise, forget about it.
May also be called
"Interests and Hobbies", or just "Interests".
References
You may put
"References available upon request" at the end of your resume, if you
wish. This is a standard close (centered at bottom in italics), but is not
necessary - is usually assumed. Do not include actual names of references. A
references list can be done as a separate sheet and brought to the interview to
be given to the employer if requested.
A Few guidelines for a better
presentation
Visually enticing - a work of art. Simple clean structure. Very easy to read.
Symmetrical. Balanced. Uncrowded.
As much white space between sections of writing as possible; sections of writing
which are no longer than six lines, and shorter if
possible. Maximum use of italics, capital letters, bullets,
boldface, and underlining, with uniformity and consistency. Absolute
parallelism in design decisions, for example: if a period is at the end of one
job's dates, a period should be at the end of all jobs' dates; if a degree is
in boldface, all degrees should be in boldface.
As mentioned above, the resume's first impression is most important. It should be
exceptionally visually appealing, to be inviting to the reader. Remember to
think of the resume as an advertisement.
Absolutely no errors. No typographical
errors. No spelling errors. No grammar, syntax, or punctuation errors. No
errors of fact.
All the basic, expected information is included.
A resume must have the following key information: your name, address, and phone
number, (immediately identifiable and at the top of the first page), a listing
of all jobs held since beginning your career, in reverse chronological order,
educational degrees including the highest degree received, in reverse
chronological order. Additional, targeted information will of course accompany
this. Much of the information people commonly put on a resume can be omitted
but these basics are mandatory.
Jobs listed should include a title, the name of the firm,
the city and state of the firm, and the years. Jobs earlier in a
career can be summarized, or omitted if prior to the highest degree, and extra
part-time jobs can be omitted. If no educational degrees have been completed,
it is still expected to include some mention of education (professional study
or training, partial study toward a degree, etc.) acquired after high school.
It is targeted. A resume should be targeted to
your goal - to the ideal next step in your career. First you should get clear
what your job goal is, what the ideal position or positions would be. Then, you
should figure out what key skills, areas of expertise or knowledge, or body of
experience the employer will be looking for in the candidate. Then, gear the
resume structure and inclusions around this target, proving these key
qualifications. If you have no clear goal, take the skills (or knowledge) you
most enjoy or would like to use or develop in your next career step and build
the resume around these.
Strengths are highlighted / weaknesses de-emphasized.
Focus on whatever is strongest and most impressive. Make careful and strategic
choices as to how to organize, order, and convey your skills and background.
Consider: whether to include the information at all, placement in overall
structure of the resume, location on the page itself or within a section,
ordering of information, more impressive ways of phrasing the information, use
of design elements (such as boldface to highlight, italics to minimize, ample
surrounding space to draw the eye to certain things).
An initial focus. A resume needs an
initial focus created to help the reader. The reader will not want to read
through every word in order to figure out what your profession is, and what you
can do. Think of the resume as an essay with a title and a summative opening
sentence. An initial focus may be as simple as the name of your profession
("Commercial Real Estate Agent", "Resume Writer") centered
under the name and address; it may be in the form of an objective; it may be in
the form of a summary statement or, better, a summary statement beginning with
a phrase identifying your profession.
Liberal use of power words.
For every skill, accomplishment, or job described, use the most active
impressive verb you can think of (which is also accurate). Begin the sentence
with this verb, except when you must vary the sentence structure to avoid
repetitious writing.
Results-oriented. Wherever possible,
prove that you have the desired qualifications through clear strong statement
of accomplishments, rather than a statement of potentials, talents, or
responsibilities. Indicate results of work done, and quantify these
accomplishments, whenever appropriate. For example: "Initiated and
directed complete automation of the Personnel Department, resulting in time-cost
savings of over 25%." Additionally, preface skill and experience
statements with the adjectives "proven" and "demonstrated"
to create this results-orientation.
Writing that is concise and to the point. Keep
sentences as short and direct as possible. Eliminate any extraneous information
and any repetitions. Don't use three examples when one will suffice. Say what
you want to say in the most direct words possible, rather than trying to
impress with bigger words or more complex sentences. For example: "coordinated
eight city-wide fund raising events, raising 250% more than expected goal"
rather than "was involved in the coordination of six fund raising dinners
and two fund raising walkathons which attracted participants throughout St.
Louis and were so extremely successful that they raised $5,000 (well beyond the
$2,000 goal)".
Vary long sentences (if these are really necessary) with
short punchy sentences. Use phrases rather than full sentences when
phrases are possible, and start sentences with verbs, eliminating pronouns
("I", "he" or "she"). Vary words - don't repeat a
verb or adjective twice in the same writing "block" or paragraph. Use
commas liberally, to clarify meaning and make reading easier. Remain consistent
in writing decisions, for example, use of abbreviations and capitalizations.
Production.
Use a laser printer or another printer that produces high quality results. It
should look typeset. Do not compromise. Do not use a dot matrix printer unless
you are applying for a burger flipping job. Your resume will look pathetic next
to ones that have a typeset appearance. Use a standard conservative typeface
(font) in 10 or 11 point. Produced to the sharpest printing quality - no faded
or broken letters; Off-white / cream or bright white 8 1/2 x 11 inch paper, in
the highest quality affordable. If you are applying for a senior-level
position, use Crane's paper. An absolutely clean paper - no
smudges. No staples. Generous border. Don't
have your resume look like you sqwuz too much on the
page.
Length.
Everyone freely gives advice on resume length. Most of these self declared
experts say a resume should always be one page. That makes no more sense than
it does to say an ad or a poem should automatically be one page. Your resume
can be 500 pages long if you can keep the readers undivided attention and
interest that long, and at the same time create a psychological excitement that
leads the prospective employer to pick up the phone and call you when they
finish your weighty tome. Don't blindly follow rules! Do what works. Sometimes
it is appropriate to have a three pager. But, unless your life has been filled
with a wide assortment of extraordinary achievements, make it shorter. One page
is best, if you can cram it all into one page. Most Fortune 500 C.E.O.s have a one or two page resume. It could be said that, the
larger your accomplishments, the easier to communicate them in few words. Look
to others in your profession to see if there is an established agreement about
resume length in your field. The only useful rule is to not write one more word
than you need to get them to pick up the phone and call you. Don't bore them
with the details. Leave them wanting more.
Length of consulting resumes. In a consulting
resume, you are expected to shovel it as deep as you possibly can. If you are
selling your own consulting services, make it sizzle, just like any other
resume, but include a little more detail, such as a list of well-known clients,
powerful quotes from former clients about how fantastic you are, etc. If you
are seeking a job with a consulting firm that will be packaging you along with
others as part of a proposal, get out your biggest shovel and go to town.
Include everything except the name of your goldfish. A full list of
publications, skills, assignments, other experience, and every bit of
educational crapola as you can manage to make sound
like it has something to do with your work. The philosophy here is: more is
better.
Verb person and tense. Resumes can be
written using either the first or the third person verb tense. Use whichever
you choose consistently. Verb tenses are varied and based on accurate
reporting; If the accomplishment is completed it should be past tense. If the
task is still underway, it should be present tense. If the skill is something
which has been used and will continue to be used, use present tense
("conduct presentations on member recruitment to professional and trade
associations"). A way of "smoothing out" transitions is to use
the past continuous ("have conducted over 20 presentations...").
No lengthy blocks of writing. A good rule is to
have no more than 6 lines of writing in any one writing "block" or
paragraph (summary, skill section, accomplishment statement, job description,
etc.). If any more than this is necessary, start a new section or a new
paragraph.
Ordering of experience and education sections.
Experience sections should come first, before education, in most every case.
This is because you have more qualifications developed from your experience
than from your education. The exceptions would be 1) if you have just received
or are completing a degree in a new professional field, if this new degree
study proves stronger qualifications than does your work experience, 2)
lawyers, who have the peculiar professional tradition of listing their law
degrees first, 3) an undergraduate student, or 4) someone who has just
completed a particularly impressive degree from a particularly impressive
school, even if they are staying in the same field, for example, a MBA from Harvard.
Telephone numbers. Be sure the telephone
number on the resume will, without exception, be answered by a person or an
answering machine Monday through Friday 8-5pm.
You do not want to lose the prize interview merely because there was no answer
to your phone, and the caller gave up. Include the area code of the telephone
number. If you don't have an answering machine, get one. Include e-mail and fax
numbers, if you have them.
General Tips
Try not to include
anything on the resume which could turn the employer off, anything which is
controversial (political, etc.) or could be taken in a negative light.
Put most important
information on the first line of a writing "block" or paragraph - the
first line is read most.
Use bold caps for the
name on page one. Put your name at the top of page two, on a two-page resume. Put section headings, skill headings, titles or companies (if
impressive), degrees, and school name (if impressive), in boldface.
Spell out numbers under
and including 10; use numerical form for numbers over and including 11 (as a
general rule). Spell out abbreviations unless they are unquestioningly obvious.
WHAT NOT TO PUT ON A RESUME!!!
- The word
"Resume" at the top of the resume
- Fluffy rambling
"objective" statements
- Salary information
- Full addresses and
zip codes of former employers
- Reasons for leaving
jobs
- A
"Personal" section, or personal statistics (except in special
cases)
- Names of supervisors
- References
Accuracy / Honesty/Stretching the truth
Make sure that you can
back up what you say. Keep the claims you make within the range of your own
integrity. There is nothing wrong with pumping things up in your resume so you
communicate who you are and what you can do at your very best. Did you ever see
an ad that didn't pump up the features they hope will convince you to buy? In
fact, you are being foolish if you seek to convey a careful, balanced portrayal
of yourself. You want to knock their socks off!
Questions a pro would ask you
What key qualifications will the employer be looking for?
What qualifications will be most important to
them that you possess?
Which of these are your greatest strengths?
What are the highlights of your career to date
that should be emphasized?
What should be de-emphasized?
What things about you and your background make
you stand out?
What are your strongest areas of skill and
expertise? Knowledge? Experience?
What are some other skills you possess - perhaps
more auxiliary skills?
What are characteristics you possess which make you
a strong candidate - things like "innovative, hard-working, strong
interpersonal skills, ability to handle multiple projects simultaneously under
tight deadlines"
What are the 3 or 4 things you feel have been
your greatest accomplishments?
What was produced as a result of your greatest
accomplishments?
Can you quantify the results you produced in
numerical or other specific terms?
What were the 2 or 3 accomplishments of that
particular job?
What were the key skills you used in that job -
what did you do in each of those skill areas?
What sort of results are
particularly impressive to people in your field?
What results have you produced in these areas?
What are the "buzz words" that people
in your field expect you to use in lieu of a secret club handshake,
that should be included in your resume?
Basic resume formats
There are three basic
types of resumes: Chronological, Functional, and "combined"
Chronological - Functional. To see what these styles look like, get a resume
book. They are usually terrible guides for how to write an excellent resume,
but they are good to see different formats. We would love to show you what
complete resumes look like but your web browser would probably do unspeakable
things to the formatting.
CHRONOLOGICAL
The chronological resume
is the more traditional structure for a resume. The Experience section is the
focus of the resume; each job (or the last several jobs) is described in some
detail and there is no major section of skills or accomplishments at the
beginning of the resume. This structure is primarily used when you are staying
in the same profession, in the same type of work, particularly in very
conservative fields. It is also used in certain fields such as law and
academia. It is recommended that the chronological resume always have an
objective or summary, to focus the reader.
The advantages: May
appeal to older more traditional readers and be best in very conservative
fields. Makes it easier to understand what you did in what job. May help the name of the employer stand out more, if this is
impressive. The disadvantage is that it is much more difficult to
highlight what you do best. This format is rarely appropriate for someone making
a career change.
FUNCTIONAL
The functional resume
highlights your major skills and accomplishments from the very beginning. It
helps the reader see clearly what you can do for them, rather than having to
read through the job descriptions to find out. It helps target the resume into
a new direction or field, by lifting up from all past jobs the key skills and
qualifications to help prove you will be successful in this new direction or
field. Actual company names and positions are in a subordinate position, with
no description under each. There are many different types of formats for
functional resumes. The functional resume is a must for career changers, but is
very appropriate for generalists, for those with spotty or divergent careers,
for those with a wide range of skills in their given profession, for students,
for military officers, for returning homemakers, and for those who want to make
slight shifts in their career direction.
Advantages: It will help
you most in reaching for a new goal or direction. It is a very effective type
of resume, and is highly recommended. The disadvantages are that it is hard to
know what the client did in which job, which may be a negative to some
conservative interviewers.
COMBINED
A combined resume
includes elements of both the chronological and functional formats. It may be a
shorter chronology of job descriptions preceded by a short "Skills and
Accomplishments" section (or with a longer Summary including a skills list
or a list of "qualifications"); or, it may be a standard functional
resume with the accomplishments under headings of different jobs held.
There are obvious
advantages to this combined approach. It maximizes the advantages of both kinds
of resumes, avoiding potential "turn-off" of either type. One
disadvantage is that they tend to be longer resumes. Another is that they can
tend to be repetitious - accomplishments and skills may have to be repeated in
both the "functional" section and the "chronological" job
descriptions.
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